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for Blind Obsession

by ZaKai

person Outcast Martyr
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear God, there's more to it. I should start checking the author's name BEFORE I start reading a story, and avoid yours, because once I read a chapter of one of your stories, I can never NOT read that story when it pops to the top of the list. Or, you could do me a favor, and only do a few stories at a time, because right now I have....

*counts* Blind Obsession, Descent, The Sound of Silence...

*goes to check your profile to see what ELSE of yours I'm reading*

Secret Arrangements is yours too. And I read Sleep, but it's done now.

Yeah, I have 4 of your own little worlds stuck in my head now. Of the 6 or 7 fanfics I ~always~ check, you just added a 4th of your own. I hope you're happy with yourself. I can't read the manga without sniggering everytime Roy and Ed interact in any way, wondering which one is dreaming about which one.

And it's all your fault, for writing like this. And now that I know it's yours, I'm gonna have to go read that split fic you and Kikiyo are writing... that's TWO more that are your fault!
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Silly Roy, just can't help being a pain in the ass, can he? Feel a bit bad for Ed thoguh, having to live with someone who's too clingy, justified or not. Excellent chapter, always a pleasure to see you've updated.
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I loved it! That was great! Poor Ed he has no idea! I can't wait till he finds out!
person Jaugi
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahh i love this fic its soo naughty! ah i cant wait for you to review id love it if you email me when its updated keep up the good work: shadowwriter5190@yahoo.com
person Briryan
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Can't wait to find out how Al act when he finds out Ed's secret. Oh and Monday night is really going to be interesting. Prro Ed if only he knew who it was. Looking forward to the next update. And thank you for the email!)
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh good stuff! i cheered when i saw this was updated lol Did not disappoint, Ed is just soo... whew *fans self* his dirty little thoughts maaaann, he is too much! and we love it! I cant even formulate a sensible review LOL Can't wait for the monday meeting!!! *squeee* What did roy buy? how will he use it on ed? will ed love it? of course he will!! mwahahaha!

Mystique monique
yes i wd love email updates :D, u know how to contact me thru FF.net so thanks!
person sethian
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story!!!
my e mail address is lunasis8.hotmail.com
Warn me when you update!! :D
person Orion117
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is meltingly hot, and I love the idea. The end sent my mind spinning in a bunch of directions. I'm guessing that the note Mustang left was a "same time, next week" sort of thing. I hope he disguised his handwriting, though! It's fun to speculate about all the different ways that Ed might figure out the truth, so I hope you write more, so I can see where you take this.
person stupefiednarutard
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh you lucky betch! (jk) You come up with the sexiest and greatest ideas. Oh, how I adore your RoyEd's... I still have to read the newest chapter for Descent, but I'd like to read it when I can concentrate on complex situations and analyze what's going on. I just took a 6 hour exam and my brain is mush, so I'll get to that later. I needed a good smut and leave it to Zakai to show me love. I really want to see what Roy wrote and what Ed's reaction might be. Are you going to continue this? Even if it's only one more chapter? ^___^

lovelovelovelove,
stupefiedNarutard
person stupefiednarutard
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh you lucky betch! (jk) You come up with the sexiest and greatest ideas. Oh, how I adore your RoyEd's... I still have to read the newest chapter for Descent, but I'd like to read it when I can concentrate on complex situations and analyze what's going on. I just took a 6 hour exam and my brain is mush, so I'll get to that later. I needed a good smut and leave it to Zakai to show me love. I really want to see what Roy wrote and what Ed's reaction might be. Are you going to continue this? Even if it's only one more chapter? ^___^

lovelovelovelove,
stupefiedNarutard

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