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OMG that was HAWT!!!!!!
seriously, that was such a turn on and i hope it wasn't a one-shot wither?? please please please?????
your work is always so awesome, and this one didn't differ. loved it. mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.... ;)

Okay...you HAVE to write more. That fic was awesome! This slash was...yummy ^.^
So I say...a few more chapters like this one and then Mustang's Identity revealed...keep it up!

I have never seen a RoyEd done like this before, ever, and I really, really enjoyed it. It was hot, it was original, and it's really really begging for a sequel :OOO In particular, I like all the ways in which this worked out because it was something Roy and Ed both actively fantasized about, and they made it work - anonymous sex is not a concept people like to explore in fandom, but uh, it does happen. What I'd be interested in is can they keep up this NSA relationship, or will eventually the curiosity prove too much...

This is totally awesome!! Loved it!! Please please please write more!! *begs with big shiny eyes* This "sex with a stranger" idea is so cool! very exciting!! Especially when Roy almost gave himself away! *sqwee!* I can't wait to see how Ed reacts when he finds out that it was Roy!! :D I wonder how many encounters it will take for Ed to figure it out. Ed's no idiot. He's bound to pick up on a few clues from his mystery partner. The scent of his cologne (with a hint of alcohol since this is Roy we're talking about! XD) or an accidentally-on-purpose left behind article of clothing. The handwriting on the note is a big clue too!! I'm dying to know what the note says!!!! :D
Please Update Soon! *begs some more*
Koneko =^.^=

Beautiful, perfect, wonderfully pornographic! You know I love it! XD I'm begging you to PLEASE continue.

Yeah, it's shiny and hawt. I can dig it! XD

OMG you are a god!!! this sh*t is AWESOME, too hot for words. just looked for it on FF.net to review there but it's not up yet... will review there AGAIN if needs be for u to see how wicked this story is, u must tell us what roy wrote, how does ed take the news? when will roy f*ck the little chibi's brains out again?!! So much left to be said

Mystique Monique from FF.net

This was very good! I so can't wait to read Ed's reaction on who it was that had sex with him. That is going to be very funny. I was wondering if you could please email me when you update this story? Thank you. Briryan

that was so cool! i'm glad to see that it's not a oneshot... it's not, is it? anyway, it was so good. i love the way you write. haha, if ed comes into the office the next day and roy sees where he gave him a hickey, i bet his reaction, whether physical or mental, would be hilarious. can't wait for the next part!

wow, Ed's a little slutty here....much love for the slutty Ed XD

kiki

p.s. when the hell did u write this...must have been asleep or something XD