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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, absolutely BEAUTIFUL. I loved it, Zakai! It's a very nice way to tie things up, and I cannot WAIT for the epilogue!
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh good good good i was so worried you would separate them i'm not happy about the date other people but i am thrilled they are together yay cant wait till a finds out if ed tells him!!!!!!!!
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(LadyMisaga@yahoo.com) It's been a while since I read this story. Several chapters later I realized I didn't leave a comment or review. So here goes.
I've been following this from the beginning maybe left some comments under Azumi-chan. But this story is really well written and the characters and pov's are excellent. My heart clenched at Ed losing his sight, he's lost so very much and he is my favorite character from FMA because he has so much strength, but I can't help but feel heartache for him for how much he has suffered. I am glad that he finally realizes that his 'lover' is Roy and hope they can make amends because they are great for one another. They complete each other and have more in common than either of them realize. I am deeply entranced and into this story and greatly look forward to an update. Thoroughly happy that Al and Ed have made amends the two of them have always been together and them being ripped apart is something that breaks my heart. I could rant about how much I understand Ed's devotion to Al and how he views him as his foundation but I won't bore you with that. Thank you ever so much for updating this story and writing such a wonderful, insightful, emotional, and moving story. Sorry for the lack of reviews, I'll try to rectify that throughout the remainder of the story. Gomen^^;
I've been following this from the beginning maybe left some comments under Azumi-chan. But this story is really well written and the characters and pov's are excellent. My heart clenched at Ed losing his sight, he's lost so very much and he is my favorite character from FMA because he has so much strength, but I can't help but feel heartache for him for how much he has suffered. I am glad that he finally realizes that his 'lover' is Roy and hope they can make amends because they are great for one another. They complete each other and have more in common than either of them realize. I am deeply entranced and into this story and greatly look forward to an update. Thoroughly happy that Al and Ed have made amends the two of them have always been together and them being ripped apart is something that breaks my heart. I could rant about how much I understand Ed's devotion to Al and how he views him as his foundation but I won't bore you with that. Thank you ever so much for updating this story and writing such a wonderful, insightful, emotional, and moving story. Sorry for the lack of reviews, I'll try to rectify that throughout the remainder of the story. Gomen^^;
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October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*yanking on my hair with both hands* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH 12 chapters!!! 12! and i am still so addicted to this story! it should be a damn crime to do this!!! what is this hun? loveless you have to wait a month or two for the next book! *falls in a crumpled heep* ugh plz review asap for my damn sanity!its terribly like heroin one time and your hooked try and get off it and you shake.....
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please oh please email me when you get the new chapter up, I've been checking for weeks!! I love this so much I can barely wait!
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October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
iloveyugiandyami@hotmail.com
love the story u made me cry
love the story u made me cry
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG!!!
I just started reading this and...
-is hot in teh pants-
OMG YOU HAVE SUCH A WAY WITH WORDZES!!!!
I just started reading this and...
-is hot in teh pants-
OMG YOU HAVE SUCH A WAY WITH WORDZES!!!!
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ch 12 anxiously waiting for more. Please?!?
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story! I absolutely love the way you portrayed Ed. I would like to be on your email alert list too becuase this is just an amazing story. Good job!
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. It felt real.
A minor point, because I know you seem to be very diligent about this: you have "site" written, but it should be "sight." I am sure you are aware of what is correct, but we all have typos. The fragment below is where that oversite (hehe) is.
"It was just so frustrating that he didn’t know. He hadn’t realized just how much he’d had—how important his 'site' was—until it was gone. It had always been there and he’d just taken it for granted... Just like Al..."
Thanks so much for your great stories.
A minor point, because I know you seem to be very diligent about this: you have "site" written, but it should be "sight." I am sure you are aware of what is correct, but we all have typos. The fragment below is where that oversite (hehe) is.
"It was just so frustrating that he didn’t know. He hadn’t realized just how much he’d had—how important his 'site' was—until it was gone. It had always been there and he’d just taken it for granted... Just like Al..."
Thanks so much for your great stories.