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Chapter 12---I like! I love how wrote the two brothers making their peace with each other. You stayed true to their characters and kept their familial bond even though they are changing while they age. Their banter was so them (especially Al reminding Ed that Al was not so innocent because he grew up with Ed the vulgar). Glad they reconciled. Mustang needs to come to terms with his feelings for Ed and his actions. He really needs to see things really through Ed's eyes...(nothing intended). Poor Ed...hope he can to terms with his own feelings etc for Mustang. Ed was on his last day! at the lab...not fair. Wonder what his future will be. Glad you updated. Thanks. (Sorry for the lame review...way too tired but had to read the update before I get some sleep...if they do not call me out to work again.)

omfg!!!!! gah!!! so short!!!! update soon ne? man i know im impatient but omfg love ur story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss plzzzzzzzzzzzz update!!!!
im probably getting annoying by now but hey least it should motivate u ...(hopefully)

cant wait for the next update *smiles*

I love this story!!! Can't wait for your next chapter. I always want to know what is going to happen next. Please put me on your e-mail list: wpalmerdrama@yahoo.com

this is such and intriguing story it's ridiculous. Not only is there hot sex, but there's a plot, and angst! X3 i <3 you! -hugs!-

i can't wait for the next chapter. I honesty hope that Roy and Ed can somehow make up, or that at least the next time they talk, Roy can not be mute. And maybe he can explain his feelings in a semi-logical manner. :o

your killing me you know that right? your taking years off my life slowly with anticipation... -sigh-
love your drama but still... love it hate the suspense... but god is it well written...

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Thanks for the update! I'm glad that Al and Ed were able to get through their problems even though it took the accident to make it happen. I love how you are giving a sense of reality to the character's emotions and consequences to their actions. This just makes your story that much greater! I can't wait until the next update!

Wow, I'm so glad they made up! That was really touching. ;-;

I honestly feel so bad for Ed...losing his sight, Mustang, etc. I just wanna hug him.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Great chapter. Glad to see that Ed and Al have worked things out. Now if only Roy and Ed can work things out. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Yay, they're friends again.

I'd leave a more intelligent review but I'm half asleep and typing on auto pilot. I just love your writing, it's always so intuitive and flows beautifully. I can't wait for the next chapter, I want to know what happens between Ed and Roy XD

OMG by the lords of all fanfiction sites in the universe this has got to be the most angsty fic ever written!! It is wonderful and I feel you pegged Al's reaction perfect!! He loves his brother to much to be disgusted by anything that has to do with Ed!

Poor Roy he is the poster boy for a toutured soul right now and I love it...not that I want to see him suffer it's just so fitting for the entire screwed up situation.

Nice job and I am so glad I voted for this to be the update you work on ^_^ *hugs Onyx aka Lynx