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for Blind Obsession

by ZaKai

person Shi_koi
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*heart*

Damn. Poor Ed. That was a helluva way to find out who his secret lover was. I can't imagine Ed blind. I mean, those gorgeous gold eyes are so very expressive.

Heh. Ed always has to play the hero. It's like it's hard-wired into his DNA.

And Alphonse! Wow. I never thought he'd be a player like he has been. I wonder if he knows about the accident. I mean, if anyone even knows how to contact him now.

Btw, I'd be extremely grateful if you put me on the list of people to contact when you update. My email is shi_koi@hotmail.com.

*heart*
person jessica
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^_^ i loved your story - you wrote the characters out very well and it was almost as if they were from the real anime. i whould to find out what happens. so chould you please keeping writing and send me updates. -thank you-
person Anon
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^_^ i loved your story - you wrote the characters out very well and it was almost as if they were from the real anime. i would love to find out what happens. so could you please keeping writing and send me updates. -thank you- lol sorry my email is riku_daisuke_and_kakashi_lover@yahoo.com
person Stormy
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
T-Tthe last chapter has me in tears it was so sad!!! god my heart just froze when ed realized it was mustang!O_O please dont stop now find time i kno im not the only one practically dying to get to the end the questions need answers!!! your an amazing writer the work and effort in your char and detail makes it so lovable,^^ if i had any money id pay you to write for me lol any way please know your life deepends on this story being completed right oh... and new chaps soon! love your work babe!!\m/^^\m/ _Stormy_
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh, oh! add me to the list, please!!
my email is :
zoeluver(at)hotmail(dot)com
yes with a u, yes its my cat's name, and yes, i made it when i was 14 or so...

Any-who-dles...! I love the story!! its a bit... odd at times (since i dont like het >.> I mostly skipped those parts, hope i didnt miss much... ^.^)
aww... poor ed!! I almost cried at this last chapter... i hope ed doesnt turn suicidal, but it would be expected after that much angst... ^.^ I love angst!! <3
OHOH! you hsould make roy ed's new partner...!! mmm steamy angst with yaoi and awkwardness on top... yummy!!
person mcdgoddess
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just started to read this story and I love it!!! I love that you had this great mixture of sex and character development. I never thought that Ed would find out about Roy this way. This story is quickly becoming one of my favorites on this site. I can't wait until the next update. I really hope Al and Ed can get back on good ground.
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Absolutely wonderful. There is just soo much emotion in this that it made me want to cry. I can't wait for the next update. Great job!
person Illyric
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would LOVE to be updated from the next chapter (if there is one). It's so angst filled and well written...I love it!

shea.p.q.ryan@Gmail.com
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD... ... ... WHY???
Why do you cause me so much agony here?
Why do you write such an awesome chapter and then leave me hanging like that???
This fan-girl of yours needzzzzz another chapter soon… please?

ever faithful reader
Serpen
person Mayana
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No clue if I've already commented... -shrug-
Poor Ed, he's so confused. I bet Roy's feeling like shit, too... Or at least I hope he is >|
Oh, may I be added to the mailing list?
Mayana-chan@live.ca

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