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wow... a very moving chapter indeed! made me want to cry! I hope to see more soon and Thanks for the review on my own story. I was glad to see you there. Amazing, AMAZING chapter! hope to see you soon!

Oh, poor Ed...*sniff* I know I wanted him to know who his lover was, but not *this* way. And where the hell is that silly Alphonse? Update soon, darling. (~.^) I'm sad now, but I know in the end I'll love everything. (^^,)

oooh! T_T that was great! This is seriously the best chapter yet! I can't wait for the next one. Poor Ed, but I suppose it had to happen. Awesome story. ^_^

Oh, I do hope that Ed gets his sight back. Also that he will work things out with both Al and Roy. Looking forward to the next chapter.

This chapter... was BRILLIANT.
I've been looking forward to it for so long, and it exceeding my expectations so much, I don't feel that I can properly explain what it even was that I liked so much about it. Hahah.

OMG! I was internally screaming the whole time! In a good way, that is. :3

But, anyway, I am loving the turn this story is taking. A very sad turn, but I'm loving it none the less.

Well, that was something I somehow saw coming but later, not that soon. But okay, I trust you and your plot.
I'd like to hate Roy for what he'd been doing to Ed, but I don't have the heart to do so. He'll start to have his silent punishment, I think that's enough suffering.
Poor both of them. So many emotions displayed. Soul wounds are harder to heal than the body's.
See you dear, good job. Bye

exelent as always! still flabbergasted at what you did to ed's eyes, but it does come natural in this storyline. i anxiously await next chapter!
-ÅStröm

Utterly fantastic and worth the wait. I really feel for Ed in this, as well as Roy.

Very nice, I did not know how you would reveal the secret, but this was a nice way of approaching it.

Well done.

EP

I am absolutely amazed with your story. It's been a while since I've been in to this fandom, but this story is certainly enough to make me want to read more again. Not only is your story well written, but the premise and twists and turns are enough to make the it one of the most suspenseful I've read in a long time. Not only that, you write the characters so faithfully while still preserving the plausibility of everything that happens. It's all in all very well done. I can't wait for the next chapter! (gtiret@oneredshoe.net is my e-mail for the update list, if you wouldn't mind adding me. thanks!) =)