rate_review Reviews

This story is so sweet!! I'm filled with warm emotion :') gosh, it's really making love, and I don't find that usually on any lemon fanfiction. It's so beautiful!! I want a relationship like that!

lol. you sure picked a wild kink to start out on. not complaining, it was awesome and oddly arousing? O_O idk really, but it was awesome. this is actually the first fic i've read with this particular act in it. two thumbs way up. my only question is 'is this going to be a every once in a while thing for Bulma and Vegeta?' and 'will Vegeta ever fuck Bulma again and be able to achieve orgasm?' my brain kept asking that. Might make for a good epilogue or something maybe. tell the after story. like 'ever since they'd incorporated the strap-on into their sex, they hadn't been able to keep their hands off each other and their regular sex life was better than ever...' just an example. it's just an idea, but I wonder those things. lol. guess i'm kind of weird that way. ^_^. awesome job, escpecially for your first time! and Vegeta's!

one of my favourite stories by far, espically bc noone was OOC. holy fuck. that was amazing.

It's an okay story. But I NEVER want to see him this vunerable again. It's, kinda creepy.

Loved it! It was smart, sexy and thought-provoking. I loved how you showed the characters going through inner conflict over every new situation that arose; Vegeta's emotional battle over what had happened to him years ago, and his shame over how he'd derived pleasure from the abuse he'd suffered made him so easy to relate to. It was all very moving, and the sensitive psychological issues interlaced with human and Saiyan sexuality as were addressed in this story were interesting and enlightening; I learned a lot from reading this and I also found it quite inspiring. Good job with writing a DBZ fic that is so intelligent and deep! Fics like that are rare in this fandom, despite the large number of fans it (the fandom) has. So I definitely appreciated this one!

it was good. i don't really read b/v stories because their are so many you get board of them. i like t/p