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I thought I reviewed this two years ago, but it looks like I didn't. If you get this, please update this fic! I very much would love to see what evil Trieze is going to do to poor Duo. Please oh please update this!

ZOMG! (drools)

Please please with frosted gundam pilots on top continue this theme?

That was incredibly hot. I know it was just a writing exercise, but you really should write at least one more chapter to it. It just leaves us readers hanging about how things will go with Duo. Not even mentioning how Zechs ended up where he is! It's very well written and flows well through the scene. The details in the descriptions of things such as how Duo is being tied up and the butt plug are what really makes it so hot. Even if you don't go back and write more of this one (or feel like committing to an arc), you should definately do more one shots!

Loved it more than a gallon of chocolate chip ice cream on a hot summer's day.

I did like the story, it is nice sometime to read a good smut. My only suggestion, slow it down a little. Your story seemed a little hurried, spacing it out and adding some more details would make it better. You have talent and I would like to see another one shot or chapter from you in the near future.

Very well written. I totally liked Zechs's part. Didn't see that coming! I know this was probably a one shot but I wouldn't mind reading more if you ever decide to do another part. Because I have to ask, what happens to Duo next? what about Zechs? it can't just end there, can it?

anime_gal22