rate_review Reviews

Wow.. what a ride! (ok bad pun) Excellent story though and many many kudos to you from those of us who love Roy and Ed! Thanks from one New Mexican to another! (although I have been displaced and miss the green chili horribly *sniff, sniff*)

The ride was excellent!!!

Can I buy tickets for another???

weeeeee!! i FINALLY got to read this story, was worried about reading it since i hadnt seen the movie yet but saw it couple days ago and decided to a) read the end of at fifteen (u said there was a spoiler, thanks for noting it btw, so i didnt read to the end) and b) read this story see how it all worked out. And yeah! i was sooo not disappointed. this was a really good story plus it was so smexy too! *grins* ed's bum deserves a medal for surviving thru all that LOL

AWWWWWW! That was so cute! Although Jean has no chance in hell with Ed and Roy should have rosted him alive for his comment at Eds tight pants.lol.

nope eiplogue is still missing...now there's even more missing O_O

Oh no! The whole chapter's not here!! The ending is missing! Ya gotta fix it ASAP! I gotta know what Roy said to Ed at the threshold (as if I couldn't guess!) and how Ed responded!! :) Hurry! I'm waiting on pins and needles here! XD
Koneko =^.^=

"I hope that the last chapter is as well received." What?! Are you saying that this is it? No more? *wibbles* Aw man! This has been such a good story. I hate to see it go if indeed this is the end. :( Well, if it has to end, so be it. I was just surprised by how quickly it ended. It was so sudden. Ed tells all his secrets about what's been bugging him and, BAM!, the end. ouch. I was fully expecting it to be a while before Ed revealed why he was always on the move, what he was searching for. He'd held on to his dream to have his natural limbs back for so long that I didn't think he'd just up and tell everything and then give up his quest so easily. I guess that's what happens when you find what you're looking for. It would be nice tho if Ed kept researching just to find out if it was even possible to get his limbs back. But, whatever. They say it's a good thing to leave your audience wanting for more. It can also be said that it leaves the audience feeling unsatisfied. It's a double-edged sword.

The lunch scene was...awkward. A lover's quarrell is not a pretty thing. Ed was definitely acting out like a three year old. Roy was like a frustrated parent with a recalcitrant child. It got weird there for a few moments. I half expected Ed to call Roy 'sir' or 'master' after Roy told him he had to stay put and "eat and be civil". It was like watching a D/s scene being played out. kinda kinky! It was no surprise that Roy, being the uber dom he is, got Ed to cave in and admit he was wrong. It's not really all his fault tho. Winry harping on and on is enough to drive any sane person to distraction! LOL! I do wish Ed hadn't let Roy ravage him like that. That was bad. Poor Ed's head is so messed up. :( I have great sympathy for Ed in his first foray into oral sex. He's a better person than I am for not raising hell with Roy when he held Ed down and all but forced Ed to deep throat him. Damn Roy! What are you trying to do? kill him?? sheesh! :) Roy did make up for it with all his sweet loving words at the end! "This is what makes you my FullMetal Alchemist and I don’t want you any other way. I love you just the way you are." *sigh* I knew I loved Roy for some reason! ;)

I would ask for an update but I don't know if that's gonna happen. *pouts* Hey, I can dream can't I? ;) Oh, about the milk in the coffee thing, you'll notice that I didn't catch it at first so in a way you kinda did pull a fast one after all! :) Also, it's 'fuhrer' not 'furor' that Roy wants to become. Just thought you'd like to know! :)
Koneko =^.^=

Now that was so cute! I like that Roy doesn't want Ed to change. He is so sweet!

Oh goddess that was WONDERFUL thank you i needed a good cry and Affie has just forgiven me for waking her up to read this (it's after midnight and i called her *snicker*) thank you again and please share more writing i'm looking foreward to reading other works by you as is Affie

Ryshandra for Afrieal
(hey this is fun usually af writes these)

Damn Ed has some screwy ideas, doesn't he? Very nice, lots of sweet parts, which I like. :)