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Oh, that was so cute! Roy and Ed are 'married'! And I'm glad Al and Winry are ok with them. I love this fic. I hope you update soon! Wait, does the military know about them? O.O

I hope you don't take my criticism the wrong way, I'm not trying to be rude or anything. Again, I don't necessarily agree with every direction you took it, but it was nicely written, well thought out and articulated (ooh, big word!) and a pleasure to read. I'll look for more chapters.

*fangirl squeals* Roy gave Ed a ring!! SQWEE!!! *happy dances* Uncork the champagne and let's get this party started! w00t! Will Roy be wearing a ring too? That would be so awesome! Surely the mighty Mustang should have some new tack, I mean, jewelry to show off! ;) (My knowledge of horse gear is quite pathetic so sorry if that line made no sense!) I was cheering Ed the whole time he was telling off Al and Winry! YAY!! Good for him! Those two had it coming. I'm sure Ed feels better now, and probably quite exhausted, for finally getting everything off his chest. Have I mentioned how much I love your Roy? He's so powerful and commanding, so dominate! *drools* Me likey that lots! Sorry, I tend to get incoherent when I'm around a strong dom! ;) Hey! Since Roy and Ed are essentially married now, that means there should be a honeymoon happening soon! *more drool* YAY! More RoyEd smex!! :D Love it!!
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

Hey! I just reread this chapter (Can't get enough of that ring!! "All of my love, forever, Roy" *dreamy sigh*) when I realized that Ed asked for milk in his coffee! OMFG! Ed? asking for MILK?!?! He certainly has changed hasn't he! XD
Koneko =^.^=

OMG! I sooo don't like Winry in this fic. Calling Mustang a horrible man. But it was funny when they got off the train and scarred Al. That was funny! I hope Al and Winry understand their relastionship. I hate it when they make Al mad. Its not nice. anyways update soon!

*tackle glomps* That was great!! :D Roy's pet name for Ed, love, is very sweet! Ed has definitely tamed the wild stallion that is Roy Mustang!! :D Stud fits Roy so well! Not only does it feed his ego (and what an ego he has!), it reflects his horse-inspired last name! :) Ed couldn't have handled that harpy from the bar any better! She had some nerve thinking she was gonna talk all that shit and get away with it. Like her skanky ass could take Roy from Ed! puh-lease! :) The absolute best part of the whole chapter - Al and Winry's reaction to seeing a freshly fucked Ed! Loved it!! I can so imagine the idiotic looks on their faces!! LOL!! The hickey was a brilliant idea! If they couldn't figure out what was going on after seeing that, then there's no hope for them. Roy certainly doesn't beat around the bush! Just throw it in their faces, act like nothing's happened, and walk away. Roy saved Ed the trouble of having to find just the right words to say at just the right time to break the news to Al and Winry. Ya gotta love Roy for looking out for his love like that - shock factor be damned! XD They now know on no uncertain terms and it's completely up to them where things go from here. Dinner should be very interesting!! ;)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

Oh dear, Al adn Winry didnt' take it that well. of course, Roy acting like a bit of a jerk didn't help. Etiquette for introducing yourself to a significant other's family does NOT include banging them in the car/bus/train right before meeting them! *L* Excellent chapter.

That was smexy! And very well written. Good job. I liked it alot. *thumbs up*

*smiles* You have no idea how much better it makes me feel to read a nice sexy story like this!! I love reading stories about Ed making it back thru the Gate to be with Roy! I always hoped that Ed would find a way and come home. I think this hope is what made it so hard to watch that one OVA with the little kids in it. That OVA only reinforced that Ed never came home. Totally broke my heart. *cries* Thankfully, I have wonderful authors like you who write wonderful stories like this that make the pain of that broken heart a little easier to deal with! (Yes I am quite neurotic! LOL!) You have brightened my day considerably!! :D Has Ed been living with Roy ever since he came back and rejoined the military? Why is Ed so restless? He's home, he has Roy, Al is human again - what's the problem? his auto mail? What is it that Ed is still looking for? the Philosopher's Stone? When Ed goes back to visit Al and Winry, will Roy go with him? I can't imagine how hard it will be for Ed to finally tell Al and Winry that he and Roy are together. Ed and Al were always so close. It must be so very difficult for Ed to be keeping secrets from Al now. Ed is eventually going to have to tell. Maybe if he admitted to his "secret" relationship with Roy he wouldn't be feeling so uneasy. Oh, and in case I haven't said it enough, thank you thank you thank you for this fantastically awesome smexy chapter!!! :D
Update soon! (I hope!)
Much love!
Koneko =^.^=

Aww, that's sweet. Whatever would Al and Winry think if they knew exactly why Ed doesn't find a nice girl? *L*