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for Who Said Making Up Was Sappy?

by TanpopoChan

person Lisa
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I tried to review yesterday but appearently my review never went through. sucks.
anywasy it was expected when I started reading. I know they were going to have their 'make up sex' lol. I expected something more dramatic though, before I started reading that is.

It was funny nonetheless and great lol.
thanks for writing KaiHil lemons!!!
please keep writing!!!
person Aurora_6392
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that last chapter was freakin' hilarious ^-^
i was so not able to stop laughting.
put up more chapters soon, or else>_<
person Lisa
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hilarious! lol. okay I can't wait to see what will happen with Hiromi! Poor girl. Then mariah...she should have heard Rei out! it wasn't his fault. Mariah should have slapped Kai!! Kai!! It's all Kai's fault!! lol
keep writing and update when you can!
person Lisa
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh! lol. they did it in a cinema!! lol. that was funny! lol. i'm just waiting for Kai to get caught!
person Lisa
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha! that's what she thinks! But Kai is sooo doing it for the 'apology' after. lol. this fight wasn't as bad as the last ones lol I wonder what he would actually do if Hil one day decided that it was enough and actually left angry...without making up. lol. that would be hilarious!
anyways continue writing!
person Lisa
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well Kai certainly has imagination lol. the things he comes up with. anyways great chapter! hope to see more!!
person Celia
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. It was fun!!
person Celia
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. It was fun to read!!
person Lisa
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol. oh those two are so funny. They get worked up over little things...then after they're done having sex they act all sweet with one another....-_-" I'll never understand them...lol

anyways great chapter although I think Hil should have gotten more mad at the fact that he kept calling her a bitch. I know I would have punched the guy. He was sooo insinuating she was a slut!

Well at least they made up.
keep writing!!

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