rate_review Reviews

I'm so glad to see this story is still up. I couldn't find it again and thought it had been deleted. I was very sad. Luckily, I found it on accident after reading through Tryst again. This is one of my favorites, simply for its maturity in writing, great job of pairing Radditz/Gohan together, and for how awesome it was reading a time travel/au story about Vegetasei still existing. Never take this story down please.


Angelwarrior1

I am SO glad you wrote an epilogue! I would have said the same thing your beta said!

Can't believe I am just now finishing this story... you put so much into each chapter, every detail put in it executed beautifully. I've honestly read through several of the chapters twice for my own personal gain :D So happy to read your work, and content with the ending. I think Radditz's idea for their "honeymoon" was very romantic, and of course they still have their obstacles to overcome, still the relationship was right. (Honestly it's upsetting to me that there aren't so many hits on this story- why does everyone freak out over the incestual parts of the story- they are fictional characters after all. Besides isn't homosexuality itself considered immoral? Moreover, you'd think the idea of bloody fights and violent sex would be more disturbing to the mentality then FAKE incest...) Radditz seemed like such a smooth talker, all of his conversations with Gohan were brilliant, real life conversations most people can't even choke out. Everytime he talked I said, "Damn!" Their straightforward approach to gaining back one another was admirable to say the least.

I was secretly hoping you'd have Kakarot take the Prince, excuse me, King, and I like how you brought back the dildo (and the gag:D). Fate is in favor of love I think. And as for Goku and Vegeta back on Earth, for all Vegeta knows Bulma was recording...

I am impressed with this story all together. Very intricate and very daring and very, very well done.

Thank you so much for writing!

TristaML

This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. I read it over the space of the last couple days I really enjoyed the desperation Gohan had at the beginning "I'd like to wake up now" and then the developing love story. It resolved so nicely, and the characterization was phenomenal (the main timeline's Goku being shy in bed, Gohan's pain when he first gets wished back). I also appreciated the fact that Bulma has to be about sixty in this fanfic and yet Vegeta is still sleeping with her and cares about her... it really stuck out in my mind. Chichi died young, eh? And the ending, the ending! Thanks so much for wrapping it up happily, I spent most of the fanfic scared to death that one of these wonderfully developed characters were going to die permanently. D: Anyway! Great job, thanks for the excellent read!

Thanks so much for this amazing story! I love this so much, as sadly, it's the only Raditz/Gohan story I've ever come across. The Goku/Vegeta, PV/K was fun too. Looking forward to any future stories you write!

Angelwarrior1

I read this a few weeks ago but you have become my favorite author on this site so I've decided to come and offer my personal review of all of my favorites of your stories.

This was one of those epic fics that stay with you long after you read it. It is easily one of the best stories I have ever read. You had so many layers of the story and were able to have the reader enjoy the progression of each individual character. And the emotions were so real. Love love love!

I want more stories from you! :)

Dear Macha,
I stumbled across your fanfic just days ago. I am not so fond of Gohan, but decided to give the story a try anyway. What can I say, soon i was hooked. Your style is amazing! I loved the characters and the mood your detailed way of story-telling created. I dreaded the story coming an end, because I wanted to hear more. Thank you for such a great experience! This fiction is one of the best I have ever read. Keep up your good work and having fun writing.
Yours,
Viandra

I loved this whole story and honestly i cant see why you don't have like 20000 bazzillion hits!!! i loves it with a passion so thanks so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please keep on writing. I really want ot read more. Cold you create another sch story with an ke Gohan. An idea is the Sayians and Namekes were oppisite each other in temepermant. Namiks war like and Sayains peaceful. The Namiks attack and Gohan ends up in Piccolo's court, via Nail or another Namik. I don't care if you have to change things around to make the story work. I am already trying to write this story and it's not going well. I hope that you have better luck.
Thanks.
Jade

I love this story. Please write another like this one, please? I really liked how you made the chareters natural to their planets. i can't wait to read more.
thanks,
jade

This story is getting so addicting! I can see where Gohan gets his brains, nice tye into the story.
Hehe I hope Vegeta and Kakarott end up together (I believe they will.) Oooh loving this story, I will be sure
to keep on reading.