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for Idomu

by Robyn

person Irol
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES! this was great, poor people though. they don't know what to do about goahn's power.
person Layla
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Let me start off by saying: Wow. Just wow. This story is so unique! I actually tend to shy away from stories that have the characters go back in time or through some sort of time warp, due to the fact that several authors can't seem to give a good plotline. But... I stumbled across yours and decided to give it a try; and I can tell you and I'm fucking glad I did. The plotline for this story is extraordinary and you keep the characters in a good state of originality and believability. I was reading through it and didn't find any major spelling or grammar errors, which I must tell you, is so wonderful. I can't wait for the next update! (Hopefully it will be soon?) Keep up the excellent work!
person Layla
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I also forgot to say that I love how you portray Pan: a spoiled brat, just like in the series. ^_^ Good work. ...And I hope she suffers more in the following chapters.
person Irol
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
uuuuuuggggggghhhhhhh, its over already. this is about one of the best fics i've read in a while. i CAN NOT wait to see what happens next.
person Robyn
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Over? *scratches head* Nope...there's 10 more chapters coming.
person Irol
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh geez, i rally really liked this chapter. i absolutely can not wait for the next one, i am loving this fic!!! great work.
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this. can't wait to read more
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, more goodness!! I read this story first at the Saiyan Hideaway, but its always nice to re-read something this good. Update again soon.
person darkserapha
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why does this extremely awesome story NOT have many, many more reviews? Review people, review!! This is one of the most intense, most awesome stories I have ever read!
person Tanya Green
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay i've been waiting for the next chapter of Idomu. This chapter was great and very emotional. Poor Gohan but his new ability is cool. I like the detail in this story and the personalities of the charaters. Is King Vegeta going to make an appearance in the story? That would be a father and son clash. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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