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is this going to be RoyEdAL? or will Ed have to choose? and what is the Cavillaca’s Child Stone? (does that make a difference?)
and how old are Ed and Al? not that is makes much of a difference to me but I was wondering about that...
looks interesting so far. hope you'll continue soon!

great story!! i really like this chap, is a great start (cause the story continue right? right? right? (big puppy eyes))! if it does, the story will be edxroy edxal or royxedxal? any of the three is fine by me so....anyways it was a great story!!

Hey, this is starting out to be a pretty good fic. I really like the premise and the direction of the plot so far. I even think this could become and epic. I'm looking forward to upcoming chapters. I'll be watching for updates!!!<3

kyaaa i love the start! i'm glad i was able to help with the plotty parts so this can be a full length story! (not that i mind tons of lemony parts, as you know lol)and even though i suggested it and knew it was coming, i still LOL'd at "cave diver" XD i hope you have the next chappy really soon cuz i NEED more dammit!

and, btw, omg "smarmily" is like the PERFECT adjective for roy's smile lmao
also, i love their background story. the added twist of roy having a weird combo of paternal and lustful love feelings for ed puts yet another spin on the incest idea heheh. and i'm glad al got his own turn at his bro's lips before the end of the chappy, too :p cuz, y'know, these are my two fav fma pairings!!
*love*

~ lg

no fair holding your story for ransom...if people like it they'll review...tho AFF is natarouis for not reviewing...it sucks but there you go.

anyway...an intersting start, I'll read more if you post it, but not if you hold your story for ransom...that's just wrong...