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by CrimsonTide

schedule March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ahh crazy horny goku is love, very beautifully done :D
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you know I;m gonna married you XD (don't worry I always said that when I'm too happy) I love this wild sex ...wait, let me clean my nosebleed XD
person SacrificialButterfly
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that last paragraph was just divine =)

I certainly can't resist the Prince...
Which means I can't resist your fantastic fanfics when it comes to him! =D
Ever think about switching the idea and making Vegeta the uke?
I'd love to see what your take on it would be =)
person arkeshaa
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, I love that story n_n

I wish it wasn't a one shot ^.^ lol
Anywho, loved it!
person Aresy
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“Vegeta?! Where are your clothes?! Where are my clothes?! Where are we?! Why do I hurt in private places?!”
LOL, that was brilliant. I really enjoyed myself, this was a Interesting and satisfying one-shot. I love when authors address this part of the Saiyan race. Looking forward to more of your fanfics.
person Saiyajinprincess
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoop! oh that was so GREAT!!! ^^ verrrrrrrry good job!!!! :D it was hot, sexy and funny!
i think it´s not easy to write a one shot. but you´ve done a great job with this one!!! ^^ whoa, and i had to laugh a few minutes, about this "where are my clothes, where are your clothes,where are we...why do i feel pain in private places ..." sentence XDD ! so awesome! ^_______^ i really love to be "hit" unexpected by humor!!! sooo. please, keep on your work. i just enjoy it! bye ^^
person Vegetachik7
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NICE! I'm not even a fan of Vegeta as the dominant seme, but this was great! And I love how...in character they were. Well...how in character Goku was after he came out of his lusty trance, heehee. And Vegeta knew exactly what he was doing. Again, very nice. i loved it.
person kerry
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi there i just wanted to tell u that i think you are an absolutely brilliant writer, i luv all the stories that you have got so far and i cant wait till that wonderful mind of your creates more!! if you have a homepage i would luv to know it so i can add it to my favourites and have a poke around :)
person Robyn
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a pleasure to read. :D V/G first times are so much fun!

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