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for Pure Evil 4: A New Evil

by sefiru

person Bikki
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was particuarily inspired by the amazing lemon in the chapter and I humbly offer to you my rendition of what i believe Vegeta would look like in those ropes. I couldn't figure out how to do the tail roping, but i hope this is kind of what you pictured as well.

http://img237.imageshack.us/my.php?image=vegeta2jp2.png
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like the feral one so you should continue that one
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
T_T what a good ending...but it's the end for now! *sob* hoping for continured use of thongs in your next fics though :D
person Zofo
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely ending lemon, thank goodness for Saiyan pain thresholds!

Thank you so much for writing this, it's really been a wonderful read, shame it's over but I'm delighted you have more DBZ ones up your sleeve, so will be looking out for them. Sadly I've haven't seen the other animes, so find it difficult to get into, maybe I should order the DVD's as it will probably be 2050 before they get shown in the UK (frown).

Good luck with your house move, I know they can be stressful.
xxx
person Katonie
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! I bask in your evil gloriousness, oh great write of the Kinky. I am forever your passionate follower!
...damn! That really sounded religious to me.
Anyway, thank you for writing, and finishing, this wonderful installment of the Pure Evil series, and I can't wait for your future plans.
Good Luck with your other projects! I'll review if I see them! Keep up the splendid work.

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie
person pun_xy
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Desecration: Alternate Epilogue Arc! Definitely! I was all like 'oh. my. god' when I read that one. And Feral also, of course, and let's not forget Frog Prince ^^
As always, nice job with the chappie and the title! Whipped Veggie? That was the best ^^ Sounds promising with more Pure Evil and the wonderful omakes, looking forward to that.
See ya around then, bai! ^0^/
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person Robyn
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Talk about going out with a bang! :D Wonderful.

Thank you very much, and I look forward to more stories when you have the chance to write them.
person kitkit
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow they all sound so good and wonerful and lemoney...i just don't know which i like more, but i think my vote is for hot mazoku action...yeah poor yusuke, he doesn't see what coming
person pun_xy
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah! It totally was too long since I read this. Anyway, the lemon in the previous chapter = hot!
And the best part of this chappie was definitely when the chibis forced Raditz to sit so they could sleep in his lap. Aww, they're so cute! And Raditz so perfect to take care of them, we all know how good he is with children ^^
Great, as always, and looking forward to the next chapter (is it the last though? a little sad...).
Love,
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person kitkit
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yum sex in the next chapter

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