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for Pure Evil 4: A New Evil

by sefiru

person pun_xy
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was cool, shapeshifters deserve a spotlight now and then!
And an annoyed Veggie sounds promising ^^
person Robyn
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:D I liked that little sparring match. Very interesting, and good visuals.
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! i really liked it! jester! kami thats great!
person Irol
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha, i'd buy one of those ;), poor vegeta, he's seems a little tense, ha. i got a nice little laugh over how gohan corrected those saiyans. with the whole prince half-blood and prefering him as a blond. nice touch!
person Katonie
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! Please update again soon! It kills me to have to wait for an update...
Anyway, keep up the good work!

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Katonie
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gahhaahahahahaha!! I'm not gonna be able to get that out of my head for a while. I just love a moody Gohan. Well, that's one group found. Now, how many more to go? Can't wait to see Vegeta whip Brolli's ass. I'm surprised Bardock isn't getting hit on by Saiyans. After all, if all the others are too young or taken, why not Bardock?? He is Kaky's dad. Why don't you bring Raditz back? That would be funny! I can just see him fuming over the fact that Gohan is a Super Saiyan! I always thought it was kinda sad that Bardock always gets brought back in most fics, but not Raditz. Besides, Kaky should get to rub his brother's face in it.
person Robyn
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOT HOT HOT. *sighs* Poor Vegeta, and he actually had to watch that. *drools*

Wow, the first ship was resqued much quicker than I thought. I wonder what you have in mind for the rest of the story. MWuahahahahahahha.
person Dragon7
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person pun_xy
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, Kakarott the porn star, sexy *drools*
That's something I wouldn't mind seeing more of, although I suppose I shouldn't say that out loud or Vegeta'd kill me XD
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! "thats prince half-blood to you." i love it! your a great writer! i can't wait for the next chapter! please update soon!

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