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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! Long-distance lemon, yum, yum.
I liked Koshubu, he was kind of the gay hippie of all the boring and dried-up dragons. Such a shame he never was in the original story *shakes head while trying to look sad*
XD
I liked Koshubu, he was kind of the gay hippie of all the boring and dried-up dragons. Such a shame he never was in the original story *shakes head while trying to look sad*
XD
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL...I think I could like your Vegeta-sei dragon. :P Totally not what I was expecting for this chapter, but that's alright! :) Gives me something to look forward to next chapter.
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! please update soon!
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha the dragon is killing me. that was so great.
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That dragon was actually kinda like I imagined he would be. Attitude wise at least! Koshubu(sp?) hitting on Piccolo was hilarious! So, what's the total Saiyan population and the Vegeta-sei population?
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! i'm so glad you updated! please update soon! i wonder what vegeta gave kakarot?
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what the Saiyan dragon looks like! Green and red are kinda taken. Maybe it'll be gold with a teal mane. Better yet, teal eyes and a red mane of fur. Red spikes running down it's back and really sharp horns. Big teeth are required. This guy does have to impress saiyans after all. The dragon is suppose to inspire awe and maybe a touch of fear. You want his looks to say, "Don't piss me off, you wouldn't like what I would do to you."
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG...the whole chapter was well written. I can't say I loved everything, because I hate good-byes, but the 'stress relief'. ROFL.
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Re-read chapter 1. Looks like Vegeta will have to face off against Brolli on his own. Of course, Bebi is a complete pain in the ass. I like the comic book line though. I'm extremely fond of the magna version of DBZ.
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Re-read chapter 2. "They must have died laughing."-LMAO "There is no such thing as too much sex with Kakarot."-ROTFLMAO Love your story more every time I read it.