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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MMMMmmmm, nothing like a really hot lemon to make one's day!! I swear these sex scenes get better and better each time you write one. Do you think you'll ever run out of lemon ideas??
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A little plot never hurt anyone, but lemons are the spice of life! Still, I'm looking forward to the upcoming adventure.
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*droools*
Vegeta in ropes, handcuffs, anything that's resticting is hot!
Vegeta in ropes, handcuffs, anything that's resticting is hot!
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank you for updating! i really liked this chapter! *grins* please update soon! poor kakarot and vegeta! there not going to be together! vegeta has to go and kakarot has to stay! thats horrible!
~Fly~
~Fly~
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH! This is awesome! (chapter 2) I really liked how Kakarott handled Mr. Satan. hehehehehe
But I really loved the developing plot. *smirks* ON to chapter 3.
But I really loved the developing plot. *smirks* ON to chapter 3.
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:D Rope fetish! You wrote this very well, especially for Vegeta tieing himself up.
Now, if it were Kakarott tieing Vegeta up, I would expect there to be stratigic knots in erotic places. :P
Excellent chapter. Thank you for the warning that there would be little contact with them for the majority of the story. I do have to say, though, that I like the plot that is building. *smirks*
Now, if it were Kakarott tieing Vegeta up, I would expect there to be stratigic knots in erotic places. :P
Excellent chapter. Thank you for the warning that there would be little contact with them for the majority of the story. I do have to say, though, that I like the plot that is building. *smirks*
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! What a plot! And Vegeta and Kakarott separated, how will you work this out! ^^
And Mr. Satan was a nice touch XD
And Mr. Satan was a nice touch XD
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Did the Earthlings send you a court jester?"-ROTFLMAO I always love the sense of humor you put into these stories. I could just see that WTF? look between Gohan and Mirai. Can't wait for your next update.
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank you for updating! great chapter!
~fly-chan~
~fly-chan~
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Macha that your writing shows a lot of improvement with this fic. I can't quite put my finger on the difference, but it's certainly there.
I really liked Vegeta absently perving over Kakarrot's ankles -- that part seemed more emotionally true to life than some of your earlier stuff. Vegeta feeling stupid over it was a nice touch of characterization, too.
I really liked Vegeta absently perving over Kakarrot's ankles -- that part seemed more emotionally true to life than some of your earlier stuff. Vegeta feeling stupid over it was a nice touch of characterization, too.