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for Pure Evil 4: A New Evil

by sefiru

person Katonie
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When life gives you lemons, make lemonade! Lovely lemons, that you are so generous in giving us readers. I really gotta give you kudos on that.
Anyway, another good chapter, even though there wasn't much going on in the lemony-goodness genre...oh well, you promise more, so I'll hold you to that! XD
Okay, so I have a question. Are Kakarot(sp?) and Vegeta so horny for each other because they are;
a)really horny because both of them are just SO INCREADABLY HOTTTT!!!
b)on drugs(I wonder sometimes...)
or c)'cause their saiyan?
I'm sure some other person wonders this too.Not that I'm complaining about their sexy, hott, horny-ness; I really DON'T mind AT ALL!!!...okay...I just realized I probably sound kinda...crazy so I'm gonna end this hear...yeah
Keep up the good...hee hee...WORK...hee hee...
...yeah...stopping for real now!
Udate again soon!!! ;)

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie
person Robyn
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Final chapter is next? What the..!!!! :( I could sit and read this universe for years!!!!! *GRINS* Especially if you throw more Radditz = mama...I don't know why, but that just tickles me. :D
person Zofo
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no last chapter next (sobs), I want more. This story is so good I don't want it to end, but I guess you have to stop it somewhere (prays for sequel).

Looking forward to the final lemon(s).
person Chibi_Dilandau
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I vote Goku changes his fighting outfit to the gold thong!

Also i LOVE LOVE LOVE the fact that the Toddlers of Doom have so much control over Raditz, it's so cute! and i love the use of the word 'toddle' it's brilliant! someone should do a fan art of Raditz with the toddlers in his lap. Good job on the writing side too, very entertaining.
person oneswish
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i friggen love this entire pure evil zone!!

dear godm, if zombie could some how manage to make it in here than i would laugh my ass off even more.. but on the lighter side, i continue to read ur work cause its such a guilty pleasure. i know that i dont even have to beg u for more.. lol!

so i commend u on ur awesome work-ness and say "keep it flowing, keep it flowing".
person Chibi_Dilandau
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! the image if the chibis aka Toddlers of DOOM! holding onto Radtiz's tail was SO CUTE! i am such a sap *giggles* but they do rock immensely. The lemon was unbelievable! A gold thong?! hell yeah! =D
person Robyn
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehehehehehe...Radditz makes a good...um...parent, yes, parent.


Kakarott/Vegeta = *faints*
person kitkit
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow
person Zofo
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh that was great, reading it I'm almost as worn out as they are (pants), and having depleted my oxygen tank I think I need a cold shower next!

Loved seeing Raditz wearing the toddlers of doom like a fashion accessory as well.

Keep up the good work (hugs Sefiru)
person Katonie
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new update! Wooho!!!...*drool is wiped off corner of mouth*
Anyway, one more PE? That sounds great!
Oh, I was just wondering, but are you going to have them(Kakarot and Vegeta) have another kid(maybe, because they're SO powerful it could be possible)? I was just wondering because other authors have done that. I don't really care if you do or not, jusat wondering if you will.
Update again soon!*smooch*

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie

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