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for Pure Evil 4: A New Evil

by sefiru

person Chibi_Dilandau
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...no toddlers of DOOM? Was a brillient update! one finger? i'd kill to be able to do that, would have so much fun Muah hahahahaha! your imagination must be huge btw!
person pun_xy
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, Veggie's so sensitive! I kinda like that idea *gets pervy glint in eyes* And two SSJ3s going at it is one powerfully sexy image ;P
person Katonie
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They never stop! It's such a beautiful thing, don't you think? Yes, quite beautiful.
Hey, are you gonna do another one of these stories after this, or do you even know? Personally, I don't think you should ever stop but it's up to you now, isn't it(wish I could actually force you but..oh well).
Kepp up the good work. The Fabulous work. The stunningly amazing, glorious work. The...okay, I'll just stop now.

Hugs & kisses

Katonie
person Robyn
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am glad to see Videl has taken to liking the idea of having a pack...I'd hate to see what would have happened if she hadn't.


Oooooo SSJ 3 smex next. mmmmmmmmm
person kitkit
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow one finger...i have to give kakarott his props.
person Zofo
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm that was lovely, and with only one finger! Loved the line when Vegeta said it's good to be short. Never thought a story could get Vegeta to utter that line, so well done.
I think it's going to get very messy with all that hair soon (hopefully). Can't wait :-)
May have to order myself an oxygen tank in preparation for the next chapter though in case I forget to breath again.
person kitkit
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
0.0 im speechlesss, i didn't know vegeta could suck himself off.
person Zofo
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, now that's what I call a reunion. How flexible is Vegeta!!

Wonderful stuff and yet more to come. Can I take it?
person Robyn
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:D Yummy K/V smut!


And...I've seem to lost the ability to type. O.o
person pun_xy
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
F*cking shit! Veggie sucking himself off! That was a bit odd but mostly so because the image was hot, dunno if it's just me but Veggie touching himself sure makes a nice picture so I can definitely see why Kakarott enjoyed this ^^
Nice, as always, and I'm looking forward to see more, as always. And a little plot you say? How very devious of you ^^
And of course you would think it's perfectly natural to break off your own fics in the middle of a hot smut scene! You evil woman ^^

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