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Another amazing chapter! I love how you reveiled things to Radditz!
Question!:
Did you kill off Nappa again or did he just act stupid? I could really figure it out in tyhe chapter.
Anyway, please update again soon! I will love you forever and eternally if you do!

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie

*silly grin* Raditz' back! Can't say I saw that coming but am really glad it did, there was never anything completely wrong with Raditz ('cept perhaps his hair). Hope to see much of him ^^
Love,
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I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

AH! Too short! *shakes fist* I liked it though. I liked it very much!


Smells like cheese huh? *ponders this*

wow

love it i feel sorry for vegeta, he was just so close

EEP! I hate those sorts of dreams, when you think you are really awake, and doing something TERRIBLE. *sighs*

Thankfully it was just a dream, and thankfully, Vegeta is one lucky S.O.B.

Looking forward to plot! (although I have been enjoying the rest of this story immensely)

There are parts of this series that I'm not really all that keen on, like Vegeta's dancing shoes, but, you know, I haven't missed a chapter yet. I think the reason is because Vegeta's so *passionately*, fiercely submissive that it fits him right. There are a lot of uke Vegeta fics in which he's subby because he's a frail, injured flower deep down inside, and those always irritate me because the characterization is so far out there. Your demanding, bitchy Vegeta is just right.

Also, in regard to an earlier comment -- I think I was trying to say that it was nice seeing Vegeta perv on Kakkarot's ankles because it's such an average, mundane thing to do when you're deeply in lust with some one. Since a lot of Vegeta's dramatic moments in your series involve him being in sub space, I liked seeing his goofy, everyday kind of adoration too.

Whoever's plotting against the two of them needs to do better homework, it seems.

Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Oops, perhaps I shouldn't have been so fast on revealing my one and only (eeh?) weakness XD
Great chap! Of course Kakarott trusts Veggie-chan ^^ I never doubted.
Mm, whipped Veggie... XD