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for Pure Evil 4: A New Evil

by sefiru

person pun_xy
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really now, I can't even get the picture of Vegeta dancing like thta out of my head. How am I supposed to work now? Ah, well, I'll just tell my boss "sorry, I suffer from acute lack of Veggie look-alikes and therefore simply cannot work until you get me a hunk of my own". That's sure to get me what I want, ne? ...or perhaps not XD

Great chap! Interesting what they'll do about Tuffles and a dreaming Veggie sounds promising ^^
person Katonie
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha.Mr. Satan is really stupid. Are you going to make him disappear soon or what? Because all he seems to do is make himself look bad. Although keeping him arround would be funny.
I feel so sorry for Kakarot and Vegeta. They're so far away from each other! They must be so horny! Poor things...
Anyway, this chapter was great, as usual, so keep up the good work.

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie
person Dragon7
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person Robyn
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*purrrrrs* The first part of this chapter was just lovely...and I am sure you know that! *winks*

I liked the second part of the chapter and the conversation and interaction between Kakarott and Bardock. *smiles*

hehehehehe, yeah, Mr. Satan has his hands more than full with the fusion. :P
person pun_xy
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, Veggie dancing *drools*
And honestly, messing with Vegeta is always a favourite ^^
person Robyn
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*chews on things* I love the way you describe this Vegeta dancing! *pouts*

Okay, that one female sayian needs to get a CLUE! I wanted to smack her the instant Vegeta thought, "She tells me her name every time she talks to me" (or something like that.)

Hmmmmm, Gohan in black vinyl. Yummy.


I like the tension you are building in this chapter. :) Looking forward to the next one!
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful chapter! i loved it! great job! stupid girl! leave vegeta alone!
person Irol
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh evil evil cliff hanger!!! sigh...its so frustrating but anticipatory at the same time! can't wait for the next one!
person Katonie
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nnnnnnnnoooo!Motherfucker! I hate you! A Cliffhanger?! ARG!!!!
Okay, I'm good. I don't really hate you. I love you, really. Please update soon though, because cliffhangers likie this slowly cause peole to suffer mental damage...ya know?
Update soon and keep up the good work!
Hugs & Kisses

Katonie
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I never thought of that dog-thing being a shape shifter. It does make some sense. Will we ever see Karin? I would think that Kakarot would want to start having senzu around for the Saiyans in case of emergencies. I do have a question though, Oolong was a pig from the start, so how do you explain that?

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