rate_review Reviews

I love this story. I like the interaction between the two. I think Vegeta being on top at the begining and later Goku turned the table only seem reasonable. Vegeta would not allow that happen only when he trusting enough. I myself found the trusting is very sexy.

The hell is breaking loose when two saiyan is preganent. I wish to see how this turned out.

OMG both pregnant at the same time, imagine the mood swings they will be having, which nether one will have the patience for!

It's going to be a bumpy ride and they will be so vulnerable too. Hope no evil villains decide to strike Earth for the moment, and there friends don't cause problems.

This is a wonderful story. I really loved the dialogue and the way the two of them almost seemed to play mind-games with each other. You have a very good grasp on both Goku's and Vegeta's personality, and even though there were a few places where events left me slightly confused, I very much enjoyed the whole story. Especially the flashbacks, and of course the lemons, though those felt a little rushed - but then again, not everyone writes 15-pages lemons. And that last bit.. well, I do like mpreg, but why is it that suddenly getting them both pregnant is such a trend? I guess I'm a little old-fashioned and prefer Goku to carry the cubs. *laughs* Still, congrats on a very good and gripping storry and I'm looking forward to your next chapter!

Loving all the ss4 in this story, that always was my favorite form. It was also very sweet when Vegeta ran his fingers through ss3 Goku's locks reminding him of Raditz. I often wonder what Raditz would look like as ss3, could he even walk with all the hair he'd gain?

Looking forward to the father and sons talk and, with some trepidation, the clash with Chichi.
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I read this chapter as a oneshot on another site, and thought it was great then, but it also fits this story beautifully.

Sorry I haven't reviewed before (I'm newish), but I definitely will from now on. Lovely story.
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Absolutely fantasitc.

This fic hasn't gotten nearly as many reviews as it deserves; that's a fact. I adore your writing style. Everything flows so smoothly. You've kept everyone in character so perfectly in my opinion, and their emotions all seem so real. It makes it easy to get lost in each chapter and totally immerse yourself in the story.

I eagerly await more from you ^.^

Well, I already reviewed at mm.org, but I certainly didn't mind reading the latest chapter again ^.^ I absolutely love the way you characterize Vegeta and Goku. They interact perfectly and it's so believable! Excellent work :)

I love this chap (Bittersweet). Awesome dialogue. Hard to do this and keep in character. Can't wait for next update.

Mmmmm...lemony. Great chapter.

*purrs* What a lovely lemon. I do so love your fics and I just wish I could write my own as well as you do yours. Fantastic work!