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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wee! Another wonderful chapter! But you ended it so cruely! *pouts* I can't wait for the lemon ^.^ *purrs*
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the dynamic between Goku and Vegeta in this chapter (7). I don't blame Vegeta, SS4 is HOT!
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, sucks for Vegeta. Then again, Bulma has needs too, and Vegeta himself said she could no longer keep up with him.... and he was having an affair too, no matter how necessary it may have been.
Hmm. I can't wait to read more!
Hmm. I can't wait to read more!
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the fact that you put so much thought into the background here and the way you use fighting as Saiyan foreplay. Also: SSJ4 smut... and rather well done, too.
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June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is hot!! I like it! Update soon please!
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your writing's a bit awkward here and there, but the emotions are nice, and I liked reading it. Also, SSJ4 smut is a rare and pleasant thing to find these days. More, please!
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I always like to see seme-Vegeta. It's rather rare, but I find I like him so much better that way. The style of your writing is pretty good, just a bit heavy on adjectives, and sometimes a bit bumby in the flow of the narration, but you definetely have got potential. Please keep on writing, I'd like to see more from you!