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Ah ah, sweet, I like seeing them like that. They have become my favorite pairing but I always wonder if the womanizer and player Roy can be with one person but your slice of life story shows maybe he can. I liked it and you have a talent for writing. I liked they way you phrased things esp. with Ed's thoughts while he was wandering around Roy's house.

I really like how Ed comes off slightly nerotic (sp?) in this. I love how you play with their thoughts, it makes me laugh at how the bounce back and forth before coming to the 'point' XD

kiki

I LOVED IIITTTTTT!!! click the lid and ed comes running... like pavlov's dog lol

They're so sweet. Poor Ed, it must be a bit boring to wander a house that isn't yours and not have any real interest in anything there. Roy just loves to tease, hes not going to be fast enough one of these days.

i love the way that you write it makes them come alive!

That was just incredibly cute. Over all too dern funny ,Ed's insecurities were a bit sad nice mix between the two,
Thanks so much for sharing .