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Beautiful story! Read all ou have up..please continue :3

This is one of the best fics I have EVER read in my entire life!!! I'm not even sure where to begin describing all the wonderful elements of this fic. The plotline is facinating! What an original concept! It's so rare to find something with this much depth and tallent. Your character development is amazing...everyone seems so wonderfully different and yet you've somehow managed to keep them all in character. Especially Kai. I have never seen anyone pull off a believably adorable Kai as sucessfully as you have!! I've raked through the entire fanfiction.net and adultfanfiction.net beyblade archives and this is the most amazing story I've encountered in either of them. Your writting has that same incredibly addictive element that made J K Rowling so famous!!! So before we all die from the suspense...PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!

Good one right so win is Rei going to pick on Kai about his hair he should wash it or something...or Braid it or something it would look good All brush out. But yeah win is Kai going to find out that he is now Black Dranzer?. How would Tyson take this news?. but yeah DO keep up the Good work okay?. Thanks For the fic!.

I read this fiction on FF.net.... not updated since ages .... I thought it was abandoned. It has a great plot.

I hope you are going to finish it this time. And don't go "phantom" on us with the rest of the story.

Damn this is awesome!!!!!!!!
just started reading it, its great people are starting to write beyblade fics again!!!!!!!!! ^_^
one question what wrong with you people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
only two reviews its sickening!!!!! start reviewing or i'll chase you!!!!!!!!!!! great fic keep updating ^_^

Kai

Hey! You've got a really good plot going here. Keep going!