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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like how this is starting, it give you a strong sense of suspense, plus i dig it ^_^ overall great start, and i hope you keep on going and i look forward to see what happened to Edo next XD.
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what an awesome start to what seems to be a very promising fic! The plotline is very interesting, indeed. I cannot wait to read more, therefore you've to continue to write, please and update soon... Poor Ed he wanted Al back, but instead he got Envy, now that's rather brilliant! Excellent work, so far!
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was great! please say that there's more! i'll give you a cookie if ya do...*waves cookie*
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...a really interesting and nice start, I hope you will continue...
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...Oh, oh dear. XD Update soon!