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That was incredibly hot and awesome. Roy as uke is not something many people have tried to do. I wonder why. It's so mind numbingly hot to think about. You did an awesome job bringing that across in the story. It flowed well and the characters were all kept in perspective very well. Great job. Keep up the great writing.

I'm never one to object to Roy getting fucked, but USA's independence day has *nothing* to do with the fullmetal universe. In fact, it's an *alternate* universe where there is no such day. And other countries than the US do have independence days, you know. Especially when the Fullmetal universe seems more european-inspired than north-american

Pfft. Obviously you didn't read the whole thing. *snickers* Loser.

Oh, I like the switch. I've never really seen a good fic with Ed as the seme - so congrats! Not only that but you did the impossible - brought Ed back from the anime ending! That ending sucks so much most of us just ignore the fact that it ever happened. I do. Great detail and description. And . . . hehehe. Ok, even if it wasn't much having Roy utter just one begging comment is great - plus who wouldn't want to tie him up?

This is one hot little one-shot you have here. (Or are you continuing this? That would be great too.)

Awwwwwwwww....I inspired this? XD You're SO sweet to me.

Dude, this was so hot. I was sitting here thinking to myself, "Damn, she writes it well." Ed/Roy is like... teh shiznit and you definitely did an awesome job. *giggles* I like how lighthearted it is, and the reflection of the characters is especially wonderful.

I loved it bunches!

Alright Ed! w00t! It's not very often you get to see Ed topping Roy and this one takes the cake!! :D (Don't be so hard on yourself, it's not that bad at all!) I wondered how in the world you were going to incorporate Independence Day into the alchemic world where such a thing does not exist. I see now! :D Ed had definitely asserted his "independence" but the truth is that both Roy and Ed depend on each other for more than they'd ever admit! :)
Loved it!
Koneko =^.^=

I thought it was great! Nothing you wrtite is bad Nom! It was great little treat for the fourth! GO USA!

That was fun. Not bas at all.