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by veggiechan571

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schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cursing seems OOC to me but if you like it that's cool

Lemon wasn't too bad; I actually enjoyed it, but it wasn't like.....mindblowing, (hell I can't even do that....I wonder how people do that.)


bah what am I saying, I sound like those critical authors who dot everything; just please make more trunten or gotenks or something with those two horny saiyajin teens.


schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
true, perhap it seems a little ooc, but when iam watching all the movies in japanese(with subs, i want to learn though) trunks is always swearing lol and the middle finger is like his favorite jesture... i was a little worried at first with adding that, but it seemed like something a teenage trunks and Goten would add into their vocabulary. We don't get to see much of their teenage years in the series. anyways thank you for your review and i will be making some more very soon.. i am working on a death note one right now, but another trunksxgoten will be up afterwards

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