rate_review Reviews

Hm. I really like this. I rarely read fics with Radditz, but I really like this one! You've got to update soon! I really want to read more!!!

Mh, nice chapter. Poor Radditz doesn't know what he's gotten himself into. I'm curious to Turles' motivation behind the whole thing. There's still someting odd about your style.. now and then I just stumble over an odd wording, but I can't quiete grasp what it is that irks me. Maybe a native speaker could point it out more accurately? But nevertheless, I enjoy the read a lot and hope dearly that you continue!

What an interesting start! I always enjoy seeing fics with unusual pairings, and Turles and Radditz happen to be two of my favourites. I'm anxious to see where you'll take this. Something about your style bugs me a bit.. it might be some expressions, like "striding on powerful muscled legs" that just seem a bit odd, but otherwise I like your style and am enjoying the story a lot. Please do continue!