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by CrimsonTide

person Anon
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A good start to what will be a good story. ChiChi is awful so far. And I can't believe Yamcha did that. All Goku needed was a friend but instead he got a monster. This is horrible. Great job so far. I'm off to read the rest!
person Saya
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are getting me addicted to this fics.
Will there be soon the new chapter? I hope so
You totaly rule!
person inumoon3
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute fic! Can't wait for the update...but I think the family should be more involved in the story! More so their kids prior to their relationship...I think it would be cute for Goku and Vegeta to spend time with their new son and their elder sons as well. Oh and I was wondering is Bra apart of the story?
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your work 'cause it's easy to re-read
J-chan
person Katonie
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooohhhhhhhhh. That is SO CUTE!!! Huggin' his tail in his sleep. aaaawwwwww...
anyway, I love your story and please update again soon!

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg! baby is so cute! hehe 'someone shrunk Vegeta' lmao! brilliant, please continue!
person Zofo
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brillient chapter. That was so funny and I laughed out loud at the 'someone shrunk Vegeta' line. Goku high was also a great giggle.

Hope you can update soon as I can't wait for more.
xxx
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update!! I'm sooo glad it was Vegeta's I don't know what to do! Whew!! Yet more comedy with the needles and gas, I loved every minute of it. More please if you don't mind.
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Baby!! :D :D :D :D

I laughed SO hard when Goku was drugged. That whole "Ten Minutes Later...: 'I love you, Vegeta. I love Bulma, too...and that guy over there,'" Was genius! XD I had to wipe away a tear. D:

But the ending was cuuuuute X3 I enjoyed the argument over the names. And Kakuto is an incredible name. x]

Haha, Mommy!Goku~ x3 -:: Love, love, love. ::-
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooooo hoped that Vegeta would be the father.
And so many Princes around, now *smiles* (how about 'The warrior formerly known as Prince' *grins*)

So, great chapter.
I wonder if there will be much more chapters? More plot?
Well, I'll just wait and see ^^

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