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by CrimsonTide

person laica
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it update soon
person Zofo
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww sweet chapter. Goku in a mood swing is so cute.

So the big event is next (rushes to get towels and water ready). Will it be a boy or girl? Will we also find out who the father is?

Ohhh can't wait!
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I <3 Geta ^-^
J-chan
person smhatche
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LAUGHED MY ASS OFF AT THAT!! Chapter 8 was soo funny. Just imagining Vegeta screaming "Great Galaxies!" at the top of his lungs and running out the door with his arms flailing over his head in a very Jim Carrey-esque manner is enough to make me fall out of the chair laughing every time. Also, The whole 'great galaxies' statement reminds me of the old Batman and Robin episodes where a very corny Robin would scream things like "Holy smokes, Batman!" I think he may have actually used the phrase 'great galaxies' before! Sorry, i'm rambling. Neways, thanks for the laugh and keep up the good work!
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^-^ I like the car stealing! hehehe though Chichi is a bitch**growl**
J-chan
person Zofo
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That made me laugh out loud at times. Very funny.
I'm looking forward to the next update.
person laica
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love your story, update soon
laica
person clarissa
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
write more this story is good after reading the first two chapters i was hooked. plus i read ur possession story and i reviewed u on it cuz that one was good so hopefully this one will b juicy or juicer.
person kuroineko
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi
Your story is so brilliant.
I don´t know what I would do in Goku´s position.
To learn I CAN become pregnant whem I´m a man, would be a shock itself. And then to get said you are really pregnant and all of this at the same day. I think I woud get a nervous breakdown.
But Goku also had to fear the child is from his rapist.
Can´t they check the DNA of the child with a amniocenteses spec to learn who the father is. I know I would not want to have a child from a man who raped me and I would not abort a child from a man I love. So they had to check somhow.
Whatever comes next I´m waiting impaciantly to read the next chapter.
So hurry up please. ^^ (hi, hi)
person Anon
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Vegeta is probably going to faint when he hears Goku's pregnant.... great story update soon!

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