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woooooooo! the plot of this fic is so different from ones i've read before. also that was a mean cliffy. i really enjoy this fic. keep it going!

I love this story... Please update soon!! I'm having withdrawls. T_T

CHICHI! NOOOOOOOOO DON'T RUIN THE SEXY!!! update quick quick quick!

Oooh, I love this! It's just too perfect. :) I mean, not only is there an actual plot and awesome development of *each* character, I also love how you've described Saiyans and their instincts, culture, and everything related. You managed to show Kakkarot communicating wonderfully without ever saying a word, and the interaction between him and Vegeta is endlessly suprising and inspiring, not to mention cute. I can't wait to find out what happens next. As for your little comments before and after stories about reviewing, etc.--I agree with you completely. As a writer myself, I can understand what you mean. Feeling the *need* and compulsion to write because your mind won't let you rest until you do, and then posting what you labored over for hours and having no one, or very few people, review. It's frustrating to say the least, and the people who were offended by your comment clearly don't have the first clue about what it means to hurt with the burden of carrying so many words, of trying to free yourself of the story by sharing it--by enduring hunger, sleeplessness, solitude and all manner of discomfort solely for the purpose of creating something beautiful. I didn't mind that you were aggressive in expressing this--I actually found it quite cute. Why were people angry? We put up with their take-and-don't-give attitude all the time, why can't they at least acknowledge the truth of what you say? Ah, well. It was amusing to read your replies to them. Honestly, I don't have the emotional energy to expend on those people. If someone insults my story, now that's personal. Otherwise... Anywho, this was ever so awesome. Hold on to that muse if you can, all of us faithful Goku/Vegeta fans are loving the outcome!

Oohh, your mean!

Great cliffhanger though...

Hope you write more soon.

You're good. That cliff hanger is bad, but man, you're good. I'm addicted to this story. It's taken me about an hour to read the whole thing so far. I should be studying, but this was more important. And I like your point about reviews. I used to write HP fanfiction, but it was so disheartening when only my sister reviewed. I still write, but I don't bother posting. I'm actually working on a V/Gk right now, slowly but surely. If I finish it I'd love to see what you have to say about it. ^.^

NOOO! what a cliff hanger! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

Oh you hurt me bad!...Please continue I love this story!

I don't know whether to love that you put up a new chapter, or to hate that that was the end of said chapter...I was really good none the less.

Oh my God I'm on the edge of my chair anticipating the next chapter. I can't wait until you post it! I have to bow down to you, you're such a good writer, you create the atmosphere perfectly, your descriptions are thorough and I love it. Update as soon as you can.