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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, now that's a cliff hanger. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What the duece?! YOU CAN'T STOP THERE!!! Well... techniqually you can... but still, I'm pouting here! I don't normally care for Vegeta as uke, but I shall tolerate it... THIS TIME. lol.
Seems Goku's memory is back since he recognized ChiChi and everything. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Excellent job and please update soon!
Seems Goku's memory is back since he recognized ChiChi and everything. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Excellent job and please update soon!
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chi-chi! That bitch! I hate her with a mother-fucking passion! Shove that gun up her ass!!! Kill her! I don't vare what you do, just make her suffer!!
Anyway, good work so far! And, since it is a cliffhanger, please update again real soon. I await your next chapter.
Hugs & Kisses
Katonie
Anyway, good work so far! And, since it is a cliffhanger, please update again real soon. I await your next chapter.
Hugs & Kisses
Katonie
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you write. My biggest compliment is that you actually make sure everything is spelled correctly. I dont have to correct anything as I read very good story to cant wait to find out what happens in chapter 7
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the pure Saiyan side Goku and Vegeta showed, you described it brilliantly.
But what a cliffhanger! Please let Vegeta be okay and get rid of Chi-Chi, nasty women.
Can't wait for more.
But what a cliffhanger! Please let Vegeta be okay and get rid of Chi-Chi, nasty women.
Can't wait for more.
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that i'm really enjoying this fic. I read fics before with Goku going all primal, but this a fresh way of showing it. ^^ I like goku as this primal animal like wild sajin. I'm just on chapt 3, but good job. Enjoying it.
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe nice chpater 5. Awww he said his name, so i guessing the real old goku is back? I kinda missed him, although this Goku is really cute.
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I just wanted to say that I like the way that you write Vegeta and your portrale of the Saya-jins. Overall this is a good fic and I hope to read more.
Shi
I just wanted to say that I like the way that you write Vegeta and your portrale of the Saya-jins. Overall this is a good fic and I hope to read more.
Shi
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love your story which by extention and association means tha i like you. wonderful story if it's not finished i may just start to cry you don't want my tears on your hands now do you???!!!! please gimme more
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your work, and I've read just about all of it I think. I can't wait for the next installment. And I hope your health concerns have improved or are improving.