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That was a good lesson! For other people of course. But still a good lesson!
Now onto what I really want to say!
I LUV this fic! I can feel the excitement building! I feel the...tension? Well, that could actually be me, but what ever. I can't wait for you to update! Please update again soon.
OH Yeah! I also wanted to say that I thought you really captured Vegeta's personality well, and also that I hate Chi-chi and think you should really bash her 'cause she sucks!
Anyway, till next time! :)

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie

well since you asked so nicely ;) of course i'll review! i love to review stories i like and this one is climbing the interest ladder!!

lol, that last comment was a hoot and actually your writing is very well done. I enjoy your style and originality immensely. Just dont make Goku too submissive k. Anyhoo, Im loving this so far. Keep up the good work and update soon. Ill be looking out for ya.

TaTa

Yeah, it drives me NUTS when I spend hours writing a fic, have 300 hits, and maybe 2 reviews. It doesn't take long to say a couple words.

Anywho, I'm still looking forward to the new chapters, but I really am enjoying re-reading the current ones :) I love your style!

Oh, and to heck with whoever said 'don't make Goku submissive'. Goku's personality is WAY more uke than Vegeta's is. SO raspberries to people who like to make Vegeta WAY ooc. RASPBERRIES, I SAY!

Yes, I will continue to post stories despite reviews or lack there of.

However, some days it is very discouraging to look at your story and only have the hit count to tell you whether or not the fandom readers are enjoying your work.

I am very thankful for those readers who not only leave reviews for my work, but for every story they read.

There have been days I had given serious thought to doing something similar to what c_v has done. Barely kept myself from doing it because I knew what kind of backlash it had potential for. (It has the potential for people to think you are only writing because you are whoring for reviews.)

c_v's not chicken shit like I am. :P He’ll call it like he sees it.

c_v is not talking about his work only, he's talking about all the stories for this fandom at this site.

Ow. I didn't even think of the possibility of a lightning bolt being the cause of that injury. But I do wonder one thing: did Gohan smell too human? Is that why Goku attacked him?

sry for not reviewing before but i will now ;-)!!! so yeah i definately love this story, and i can't wait for the next chapter!

ooohhhkaaayyyy.......
I enjoyed the warm fuzzy cuddle at the end of ch3.

nice chapter! i liked it! very well writen. vegeta's my favorite! please update soon!