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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you are good. I've never liked Hughes yaoi because he's so in love with his wife and adores his kid, but you made it believable and sexy. Great job!
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August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you really capture Ed and Maes well. I feel sorry for both of them, and yet it was sort of sweet. I would love to see it continue.
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, sexy and sad all at once. I loved Ed as a time bomb, so true. And I adore Hughes and his sacrifices to his dream.
I'd ask for more chapters but I'm almost afraid to read what I know must happen.
I'd ask for more chapters but I'm almost afraid to read what I know must happen.
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was vaguely disturbing. No, allow me to correct that to rather disturbing. As always you manage to give each character additional personality, augmenting the canon figures. I liked it a lot, that Hughes would do anything to push Roy to the top, and Ed's desparation was clear. THis is getting long, so awesome job!