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*brain exploded*
ghnhgnhnngnnnnnnn

Damn that was awesome! I'm hoping for a multichapter here, I want to see what happens if he tries to take one of those gloves and gets caught. Fucking awesome job! (excuse the language) I hope you continue!

-Emily

Interesting. There are some confusing parts - mostly at the beginning and a little at the end. (But I think that was intentional). A little bit of proofreading can fix this.

As whole, excellent description and you create very vivid scenes. Plus, I don't think I ever read a story quite like that - that's a good thing. I'm curious to know if this was intended to be a one-shot? There are hints for additional chapters, but . . . well do as you like.

Great fic.

hot damn!!! *wipes nosebleed* that was hotter than hell... no pun intended. ;) are you going to add more? like what Roy thinks about Ed's little fetish?

That was hot! :) I like where this is going! I can't imagine how Ed plans to get his hands on one of Roy's precious gloves. Roy isn't likely to just leave one lying around so it's going to take a bit of effort on Ed's part if he's going to get one! Unless of course, Roy uses one as bait to catch Ed! :D I can't just imagine Ed's face if he got caught red-handed with a glove!! Sounds like fun! :) I hope there will be more coming soon!
Love it!
Koneko =^.^=