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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far - it's so gritty and detailed. I applaud your ability to manipulate so many PO simultaneously! This last section, however, is a bit sad and it's beginning to feel a bit too drawn out.
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November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I demand more! Seriously! I should have reviewed a while back when I was thinking about something I wanted to say... now I can't remember what it was. Oh well. I don't know if you intended this, but I have a wonderful mental image of a very high Chang Wufei running down an alley, screaming, and waving his arms to get as much attention from the cops as possible. Crap, I think I was going to say something important too. *sigh*
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
god this story is sooooooooo good!!!!! I really enjoy the inner monologue and character depth <3
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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! Well thought out, good plot line, well written. An interesting twist on each of the chars. they all have their own problems and deal with them differently. Great job, keep it up!!!!
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September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story deserves more reviews, dammit! I love this story. I really think you're doing an awesome job with the characters, and the plot... the PLOT~~! There IS plot, and it is great! O_O *grins* Keep up the good work!!
...now... I need sleep... but I couldn't possibly go away from this site without leaving you some comments.
- Z
...now... I need sleep... but I couldn't possibly go away from this site without leaving you some comments.
- Z
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...Zechs is a good guy...thats a role reversal...though would you say the Gundam Pilots have changed roles? In the anime, yes they are considered war heroes but throughout the whole ordeal they were known as the bad guys...makes you think...
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August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a jerk...Duo should have bitten his dick off! What a jackass though...Heero should make someone suffer! Mind you...if he's already got his jack material then what does he need a body for? *snickers*
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August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Duo is a comic! Slump against the wall pretend to be asleep...then still be mouthy to the cops even though he had no proof that Heero would return to him! Classic!
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August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Never read the book but this chapter was certainly...tame. I enjoyed it don't get me wrong...but there need to be more blood sex and violence! Bless Trowa though...so new to this game...makes me wonder if he even put his heart into the 'game.'
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED THAT LAST CHAPTER! Which may sound weird but NO ONE WRITES THAT MUCH DETAIL! Which is why I worship the ground you walk on! All this fluffy junk....ABSOLUTE BULL! THE BLOOD SWEAT PAIN AND URINE IS WHERE THE ACTION LIES! You like totally rawk!
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