rate_review Reviews

chapter 2 was just too much fun! i love those confessional style stories/chapters like that. and their sniping just made it that much more enjoyable. i'm really enjoying these little insights into the backstory of my current favorite fanfic saga.

I love this prequel to "For Him For Her". It is sweet but sad at the sametime because we know what will eventually happen. Thanks.

this is so sweet. (chapter 1) but its almost painful to read, because we know what's going to happen. (no spoilers for anyone who hasn't read the other stories!) beautifully written. i really should review for you more often, because i really enjoy your writing.

Kinda bittersweet since those of us who've read "For Her For Him" know how this will end. *smiles* Yeah, I can see Riza reacting like this. ;) Actually, I'm surprised she didn't shoot Roy on sight first and then cuss him out! XD I thought it was sweet that Roy stopped to check in on Ed before he got himself a drink. Aww! Roy does care about Ed even if he won't admit it - yet! :D
Koneko =^.^=

Very nice! I really like this. There's not one bit of descriptive narrative anywhere in this and that makes it unique and open to so much interpretation. Where are they having this conversation? When does it take place? Is Ed still pregnant? Are they married yet? What started this conversation in the first place? Ah! Lots of lovely questions that don't really need answers. You could read this a dozen different times and come up with a dozen different scenarios! love it!
Koneko =^.^=