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by StarMadison

person Amethyst-eyed Koneko
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
D'OH! Well I feel dumb now that I've read your post in your bio. *sigh* Had I been paying attention I would have remembered that Ed had already seen the patch and that Envy was stuck in dragon from. Now that I have these facts in mind, I like this one-shot even more now!! :)
Koneko =^.^=
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this a lot. very sweet. I'm just curious about some things. Why didn't Ed react to Roy's eye patch? Roy does have it doesn't he? This really is Roy there with Ed and not Envy in disguise right? I would be SO not happy if this was Envy and not the real Roy!!! grr! The eye patch is crucial since it would prove this is Roy and not Envy. I think if you could tweak your story a smidge to answer these questions this little one-shot would be perfect.
Koneko =^.^=

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