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February 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I would read that book!
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September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I tried to review this and it didn't go through, so I must try it again because I loved it that much! XD I loved this, it had to be one of my favorites I have read for this pairing ever. You did a fantastic job on it.
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August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think this is the first het DBZ pairing I've ever read. Very descriptive. Damn. *Fans self* It definitely makes sense for Vegeta to keep even how he takes in pleasure under control, considering his upbringing and generally avoidant mannerisms. And I could definitely see Bulma taking a scientific approach at him. But you tell it so well. Bravo.
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November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVE it. Nice concept - I can imagine the prince of saiyajins enjoying the full perks of his male's anatomy, and Bulma is just the gal for the job. Nicely done. There are some editing issues that should be addressed, misspelled things and improper tenses here and there, but everything else is tip top.
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the deep thinking you put into this one-shot. Gives a whole new perspective. I loved it.
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you did a fucking amazing job
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome! the art in your writing is simply beautiful. great job, i really hope you write more cause you have an awesome talent!
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT was awesome. Great story!! I hope you write more. That was really hot....(^_^)
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was reallllllyyyyyy good ^_^
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August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT . WAS . INCEDIBLE!!!!!!!! How the fuck did you manage to do that? You completely captivated me! Oh my god I loved it!!! Honestly, well done! This is probably the best one-shot I've ever, ever read!