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July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*embarassed cough*...yeah, so. I like the fic...and I can not wait for the updates on the others.
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October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! I hope you make the next one cause I would really love to read it!
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October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I also agree that it was kind afast and a bit too out of character. Maybe slow things down and give a more natural progression? But I liked the concept. There should be more to it, it seemed more like a first chapter. Keep writing and improving!
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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice one, but i feel it was fast, kind of fast on the lime/lemon part i dont think they werent such a pervert and hornie men but, where was the seduccion, the lust and the other things like that. and can you tell me if in that page are more fics of trowa&quatre???
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