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for Red Flower, Black Dragon

by shinobilover23

person Zofo
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love how Goku is so protective over Vegeta. When he was confronting his ex-friends and Bulma he was so strong and Saiyan, leaving them in no doubt of the consequences if they crossed them or Bulma killed the baby. What a nasty piece of work Bulma is, glad they took Trunks away from her, if she was prepared to kill him before he was born I shudder to think what she would be capable of once he was.

Hopefully Vegeta will get to raise Trunks with Kakarot (baring any ex-friends making despicable wishes on the dragonballs), but I still hope they have one between them too.
person Dragon7
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON. I hope you get over your writers block
soon and that things with school get easier for you.
person kitkit
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow me love
person Zofo
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That lemon was hot hot hot, but why hasn't Vegeta completed his side of the bond yet? Has Bulma done what I think she has? I hope the bond is too strong to break but worry you have something up your sleeve (bites nails).
xxx
person Dragon7
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If Bulma has made herself get pregnant with some of Vegetas old sperm i will personally jump into my TV and kill her!
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And thus there was trunks...but what of goten? ((..this is just a guess cause well......TRUNKS IS CUTE!...**cough**))
J-chan

P.s-you rock!
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I LOVE your evil cliffy.....I know a secret!
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
About damn time Goku did what he wanted instead of what everyone thinks he should do. It's amazing how people will fly off the handle about someone else's life and they don't know what they have to deal with or what happened to bring them to that point. Great story!!
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hell Yeah Goku!!!!! Tell them to bug off and get a life! They don't know the crap he had to put up with being with the "harpy" now he is fre and happy, they should get over themselves. Great story!!

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