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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is very beautiful, but sad. I can't help but wonder why Trunks acted like that or if he'll ever come back. Anyway, I enjoyed the scene with their first kiss above the city :)
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice I love the emotion here you could feel Goten's sadness
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.o ????? its complete??....but...wah.....???? >.<
so confused!
...still good^.-
J-chan
so confused!
...still good^.-
J-chan
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October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No! Don't make it a oneshot, Goten doesn't deserve this ó.ò I loved it though, sweet and sad, but what can I say, I'm a sucker for happy endings ^.^ think about a sequel, please.
Nana
Nana