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Now this was very well done, but I'm really looking forward to the actual plot. I just love how you will not have Trowa and Wufei rushing in to save the day. This last part showed us just a hint that Duo is alive in there and he has the strength to set himself free if he just had something that managed set him off.

I also liked how Duo uses love as an excuse to not fight. Far to often you meet people who will put up with just about anything from their partners because of this excuse. That he wont think about it also contributes. You can't start a revolution without thought.

I've read a bit of your other stories but they never really stuck to me. I'm no saying that they are not hot as hell or badly written, I just have a habit of getting bored when there is just an endless amount of sex. This story on the other hand really spoke to me. I love the layers you built on Duo. His insecurities, his joy, his struggle to remain sane.

I'm looking forward to seeing Wufei and Trowas normal, healthy lives crash into Duo's twisted reality.

And about Quatre the bastard; I love it. You are not the only one who are ready to scream every time someone writes about the giggling innocent Quatre who could never hurt a fly.

I am also curious about Wufei since he is the only character without screen time. Trowa said that Wufei had a romantic interest in Duo but we have yet to hear this from him.

I would just love for Wufei to walk into that book store and be surprised to see Duo working there. Maybe let Duo get the chance to sneak around a bit to meet his two other friends for coffee or something. To have Duo slowly realizing that he has options in life...

Hmmm, well I'm getting ahead of myself. What ever you choose to do with the story will most likely be fantastic. I'm looking forward to more.

Omg...... I don't know really what to say to a fic like this. The first chapter caught me off guard. Nice detail though.

*is staring at computer screen with wide eyes and figiting*

Holy hopping sea turtles on a pogo stick! I'm pretty sure I ish blushing right now! OOOO! I wanna read more! Right now! this is another one I want you to e-mail me about when you update it! I am insanly curious! and I love Duo as an uke! I can't wait till the others make another appearence! I wonder what will happen!

Write some more! Quick, quick!

I love it! Definitely can't wait to read more.

hi! I'm glad for another update. It's quite graphic of what you've written. that's good.
However i'm still not quite sure what the plot of the fic is .. ie where is it heading to? Is Duo going to live the rest of his live being abused like this? Will he rise up to be Shinigammi again?
Will he run away?

Duo has been beaten down way to many times now to be able to leave by himself. I had hoped Trowa and Wufei would have noticed.the abusers Heero and Quatre think its their right - I hope your story gives some hope to the downtrodden- there are women and men who end up killing their abusers- I just want Duo to be able to leave and get help and a worthwhile sense of self and a decent lover. The angst and sorrow duo shows is very well done.

Great! Quatre as the bad guy is pretty new thing to me. Poor Duo. I love this fiction, so much angst. As much I love the angst I also hope there'll be some comfort to Duo too. It's good start, continue the same way. I'll come back for more.

Poor Duo, please update, wanna know what Trowa does.