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by shinigamiinochi

person Miishii
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok now I am curious! Did any Oz people see duo with his wings? Are they going to want to experiment on him now? Or will Duo be found by heavens warrior? Will Heero help him? Where did they land? and what did Duo do with the souls he ripped out? I'd be funny if the Dead Oz soldiers turned into zombies and killed off the base. AHA it would serve them right.

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Ooops sorry i just suddenly had night of the living dead pop into my head
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
point 1) DUO CAN'T BE TAKEN AWAY!!!

point 2) LOVE this fic, good writing!

point 3) please update soon
person Amagica
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this! The writing is more like fanfics which was kind of hard to adjust to since I was thinking it'd be more like the petshop or horrors. I found it very confusing when you had one person say something, then the other persons reaction on the same line, but they're response on the line after. It makes you think they other person said it since their names are on the same line. But I really like the concept! I can't wait till you finish it and I get top read it all! I'm curious to find out who dies. ^.~
person Amagica
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oops! I made a mistake! My review for death was actually meant for dearly departed! I accidentally clicked on the wrong fic and didn't check to make sure I was reviewing the right one. :sweat:

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