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Hello, remember me? I've been away from AFF for a long while, didn't even finish my stupid story (the last chapter's almost finished, but it's still lacking something) and now I returned to all the stories I used to love.

God I was such a giddy kiddie before it makes me laugh, but nonetheless all I said in previous reviews remain truth.

The ending was very cute, I haven't checked yet, 'cause my return to AFF is still very recent and I was checking other fandoms, but if you haven't you should make a sequel to this one.

Well, I think I'll assume my responsibilities too and finish my goddamn story.

See ya!

(haha spamkiller thing says "69"; they always say funny things, it's one of the joys to review nowadays [just a little bit sarcastic, but not so much])

If you want to write in a fandom that gives lots of reviews, Harry Potter is always a good bet. That's where most of my writing is. ^_^

Well, I hadn't seen this fic until your most recent update so I read the whole thing today. I enjoyed it alot. I especially felt Goten's shock and panic when he saw Trunks' face on that giant tv and I thought the sex scene with Kaiyo (not sure if I'm spelling his name right) was pretty hot. I do wonder what ever happened with that film though. I think it would have been very interesting if Trunks saw it. But I guess seeing Goten in that strip club was probably pretty shocking, too. I wish I could have seen him there, hehe. Loved the use of makeup...I think it would look so good on him. Only thing that was sometimes distracting was the changing of tenses. I know a lot of fics go back and forth between 2 characters' first person POVs but then when you throw 3rd person in there, too, it was a bit strange. I thought Trunks and Goten were in character and well-done. Yay, Truten :)

This ws a good fic...I was waiting for more in the end...???!!!

If there isn't any more than there should be..:o)

What happened with the other guy??? Is he a person that doesn't lose what he deems his???

Just some thoughts!

Oh wow, cliffhanger! I love it, I can't wait for more. Do you have an updates list? If you do can you please add me? bubbles5166@hotmail.com

NOOOOOO!!! OH GOD NO GOTEN! I didn't get past the first few lines of this chapter and...IT'S SO WRONG! WHY?!!!! WWWHHHHHHHYYYYY?! Okay I'm off to read the rest now.

Now, now. Goten is just about to admit why he ran away from Trunks! Please update soon so I can read about Trunks reactions!

The story itself is pretty good. I have to admit I was shocked when Goten became a stripper.... *mumbles wish I got to see that mumbles & blushes* But now Trunks is back! So update!!

This story is made of awesome. Please update soon! :)

Oh finally! Now things have got to work out for them! Hope you update soon ^.^

O__O ohmigawd!!! Please please please update soon!! Did Trunks just catch him while he was.... like that? Like... like... if someone asks 'howsa hangin?' you say 'look for yourself' kinda thing? And more importantly, did Trunks recognize him just by looking at... at that hot (and probably at the time sweaty) and sexy naked body? Oh man oh maaan!