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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is getting very exciting.
Still not sure what King Vegeta was trying to do with injecting Prince Vegeta with the medications, it only seems to make him more crazy. I'm hoping they all get away somehow. I mean Prince Vegeta, Bardock, Kakarot, Raditz, Tora.
So Prince Vegeta has a thing for Bardock. Isn't he too old for him? Wouldn't he prefer Kakarot? Sorry, that's just me loving Vegeta/Kakarot pairings, but Bardock does look like Kakarot so maybe there is still hope for me :-)
Still not sure what King Vegeta was trying to do with injecting Prince Vegeta with the medications, it only seems to make him more crazy. I'm hoping they all get away somehow. I mean Prince Vegeta, Bardock, Kakarot, Raditz, Tora.
So Prince Vegeta has a thing for Bardock. Isn't he too old for him? Wouldn't he prefer Kakarot? Sorry, that's just me loving Vegeta/Kakarot pairings, but Bardock does look like Kakarot so maybe there is still hope for me :-)
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story please continue writing it and post againg soon.
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is getting very gripping. I hope Raditz and Kakkarot survive, as King Vegeta is super saiyan surely only Vegeta can stop him.
I'm eagerly waiting for more.
I'm eagerly waiting for more.
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
im liking this fic so far, very different
great chapter!
update soon!
Soneji xxx
im liking this fic so far, very different
great chapter!
update soon!
Soneji xxx
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting.
Can't really see any pairings yet (hopes for V/K), but the story is gripping anyway. Suspect the medication isn't for Vegeta's benefit.
Can't wait for more!
Can't really see any pairings yet (hopes for V/K), but the story is gripping anyway. Suspect the medication isn't for Vegeta's benefit.
Can't wait for more!
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!