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Love!

Wowww..I'm really amazed I think this is the best story I've read in a long time :) I love it..really its great..I love ur writing style.I love the idea of how its along the same story line but just that Vegeta n Goku are together..I love Vegeta in this..he's so loving n caring..I just love it! yay! it's great..I love how sweet he is to his boys..awl his boys so sweet..I can't wait until the next one n him n Goku are together again..I love how when Goku shows up n sees Goten..awl yay..I just love everything about this story.

wow that was hot XD i don't read fan fic for the lemons but i've read a lot of them and that was really good =) great work! (no seriously...it made me cum....and ima chick) LOL XD so ya great job and i can't wait to read more of your stories

Ok, wait a second cause I'm feeling confused! Is this story really done at 6 chapters? Cause I went to the sequel and it starts off right after some big battle and I have no idea what's going on. I stopped reading it just in case this story isn't complete.

@bunnicle: I'm very sorry for the confusion. I was a very newbie writer when I wrote this part of my series, and I had this stupid assumption that everyone was familiar with the plot of the anime. Between the end of this story and the beginning of A Saiyan Way of Life, the Buu Saga happens. I decided to let that tell the story between mine instead of doing a rewrite or at least more description. Truly sorry for the confusion. I would keep reading the sequel though, because this story is done. And eventually I leave the territory of canon (for the most part) and everything thing makes more sense.

@everyone else: Thanks so much for the reviews everyone. I really appreciate it. I just wish AFF.net had a better reply for reviews system. What I said to bunnicle also applies to all of you, and I've changed my final AN accordingly, to hopefully clear up confusion. There is an uncomfortable gap between this story and its sequel. I was just too new and too fangirly to notice it all those years ago (and now it's too much of a hassle to change). So hopefully you all continued on and forgave me in part for dropping the ball. This series gets so much better, I promise.

I really LOVE this story and Gk/V is very cute couple............ and i really dont like chi chi dat much cause she is a bitch sometimes.......... but all in all the story was great and i can't wait til you continue this story!!!!!!!

I loved it ^_^ And now I am going to go read the sequel :D

Bulma, what a bitch, being all nicey nicey. O_o LoL

I can never decide what to do with her or ChiChi either, that's why I haven't posted anything yet. Love this story hardcore. I can't wait to start the next segment tomorrow!

Please ma'm can i have sommore? <3's U!
J-chan

heehee he found Grampa Gohan's house XDXD